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Themes for Crooked Wings

TODO: 
  -add/remove/edit elements on the document
  -WEIGH elements on the document 
  -how can the protagonists and other characters push these elements? 
  -how can events and choices push these elements?

Frequency is roughly done as a percentage score but that's not very necessary 

decisions
STATEMENT IMPORTANCE FREQUENCY DIRECTNESS
"free" unregulated markets allow actors with power to limit freedoms of others Less Important 3040 Subtle
The 'one great man' idea of history is trashMuch More Important35Very Subtle
your worth transcends a paycheck  More Important 820 A Little Subtle
socioeconomic class is not divinely (or morally) fated Much More Important 1230 Direct
passing down wealth without property taxes (??) Much Less Important 510 A Little Direct
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This idea may have been jettisoned. I'm not sure. If not, I think it could be a good vector for exploring your themes. This touches on the institutional rot question. This is also a great historical reference. Many of the things that people have seen as unintended by capitalism are, in fact, intended...or at least the worst things are hard,ignored. butHomelessness, it'salcoholism, surprisinglywar easyenvironmental to make bad decisionsLess Important10Moderatedisaster....



QUESTION IMPORTANCE FREQUENCY DIRECTNESS Q Notes
'usury' might be a useful financial technology, but...  Much Less Important 2 A Little Subtle The interesting thing about usury, is it is NOT a positive technology. At a certain level of debt in the population, return on investment goes to zero anyway. That's why Jubilee.
WHAT'S WITH PRIVATE PROPERTY, ANYWAY?!
  property as refuge 
  property as 'I can kick you out' 
  property as 'I get access to the resources here' 
Important 8 Direct I have a podcast for you on this: It's the socialism series by Matt Breunig. Podcast is the Breunigs. In fact his writing might be the best guide to property arguments. (I'll give away the end: It's philosophically indefensible, if you're premises are "liberty" or "utility" or "just desserts"...We can talk more.
what is the difference between luxuries and goods?  Less Important 5 A Little Direct It depends what you mean by luxuries and by goods. Anything bought and sold on the marketplace can be a commodity. Even a luxury good. It follows commodity logic. (https://www.marxists.org/archive/marx/works/1867-c1/commodity.htm) Where non-luxury commodities differ from luxury is in how they are priced, and how they are viewed.
the real enemy isn't some individual person as much as it is INSTITUTIONAL ROT? More Important 42 A Little Subtle

This question is CRUCIAL. Unfortunately, I don't believe it actually has much depth, as a question. What makes it interesting, to me, is that our society tends to view problems with Capitalism itself, as problems with institutions not working as they should.

My firm position is that institutional rot is never the deep problem within capitalism. The problem is that "rot" is built in. Take Wall Street circa 2008....Can we say that it was institutional rot, or that the institutions were functioning as they tend to function over time? So, I would say that all the things that LOOK like institutional rot are in fact features of the whole system. There is no parallel universe with an ethical wall street, or even one where there aren't giant devastating crashes. Capitalism is fueled by disaster. 

IS THERE ANY SAVING CORDANN?! Can it be reformed? Important


IN A CAPITALIST ENVIRONMENT: is the literal possession of money/capital INHERENTLY not-good? [does the money corrupt them?]  Less Important 3 Subtle Yes. Bad. Accumulation of wealth bad...for an individual or cadre. For the public, accumulation is quite good. Can't have bridges without accumulation. 
Is property theft? Much Less Important 1 Very Subtle Yes. But whyyyyy?
What is 'disability'? Much Less Important 6 A Little Direct I like this. I don't know how to answer.
How does one want their society to react to 'disabled' people?  Important 20 Direct
when can an individual throw up their hands and say 'this is not my problem'?  Much More Important 13 Very Direct THIS. I think this is one of the strongest parts of your story: complicated calculation of "should I act".  heroism vs. complicity. 


THEME IMPORTANCE FREQUENCY DIRECTNESS
ABSURD/SLAPSTICK HUMOR Much More Important 35 Very Direct
Satirical humor Much More Important 19 Direct
exploring how institutions influence and coerce individuals  Less Important 15 Moderate?
you just know that some things are right (slavery was bad) [HEROISM]  Much Less Important 10 Subtle?
moral complexity! (There are no perfect choices) [when to 'retreat']  Important 21 A Little Subtle?

...do 'themes' need to be ranked ordinally with each other?

Unsorted notes: 
-people second-guess themselves about their difficulties? 
-institutions cause static: GAS GAS GAS vs instutitional static 
-COMPROMISE (when)

EXEMPLIFICATION SPREADSHEET

CHARACTER OR INTERACTION OR EVENT OR STORY-BEAT OR GAME FEATURE STATEMENT/QUESTION/THEME TO EXEMPLIFY HOW IT IS DONE  Q Notes
Veezal


Kaiyara


Zelrik


Tawnette






Sedrin


Salamin






Rrajak






Kelechi


Ahamefula














































The unleashing of demons is seen as an unintended consequence of Violet Fulgurite processing.production. However, it is in fact a feature of production, and one that is encouraged and exploited by a non-zero faction of the owners. 

This idea may have been jettisoned. I'm not sure. If not, I think it could be a good vector for exploring your themes. This touches on the institutional rot question. This is also a great historical reference. Many of the things that people have seen as unintended by capitalism are, in fact, intended...or at least the worst things are ignored. Homelessness, alcoholism, war environmental disaster....




'Chasing One Ending' makes it failmoral complexity! (There are no perfect choices) [when to 'retreat'] 

Resource meters moral complexity! (There are no perfect choices) [when to 'retreat'] We have to balance Attention meters, morale meters (sanity? organization?). 


 


(repeats of any item in the spreadsheet are okay)

Night Cycle Action names; 
  Boots on the Ground 
  Socializing! 
  Take a Nap 
  Lay Low with the Enemy 
  Spanners in the Gears! 
  WE RIOT!! 



Link to general theme page