Script Drafts
(VEEZAL RUNTHROUGH)
N: okay Veezal! Rise and shine!
It's time for your first day at work. Isn't that fascinating?
V: here I go! A new home!
N: Cordann! A land of dreams! Far away from home and all of its messiness. Up and at 'em!
V: im at it!!
N: So convenient that we didn't need to do an apartment search. Very nice of Ultraviolet Industries Inc to provide us with free lodgings!
V: PERKS!
[TUTORIAL SCRIPT}
Lornix: Hello! I'm Lornix, and this is Pryden!
Pryden: Hallo
Lornix: [awkwardYou pausemust afterbe textVeezal? screen changes to a Pryden who is silent but smiling: "..."]
Veezal: [Well,]That's Nicemy name! It's nice to meet you both!both. This is the Risk Mitigation training session, yeah?
Lornix: OneYes! As you may recall, one of your primarymost important tasks is to help mitigateresolve any on-site disasters.disasters that come up. Your resume says you don't have any direct experience with that?that, [Asif I'm correct?
Veezal: None whatsoever! At this point, a (jobsmall title)text yourbubble primarymight taskappear is to deal with Emergency Disaster Management. HR flagged you for training, if I remember correctly your resume didn't list direct experience with that.]Veezal: lolno [slightly embarrassed: Right.]Pryden: lol [cutsnext to Pryden again, still smiling:saying "..."]lol"
Lornix: Right! Well, thankfully we have a corporate on-site training program to runget you through! [to certify you for Emergency Disaster Management] (I like this because the acronym of EDM could be a little funny elsewhere, while not a music type in this universe folks with general music knowledge will get it) [Usually we'd have a group of on-boarding employeesup to trainspeed! at a time, but the other 3 recruits are completing EDM training at (other location),If you'lld meetfollow upme, with them in (place)please..].
<MIDDLE>
Veezal: That's it?
Lornix: That's about it!
Veezal: Huh... (is this a feeling of victory over a challenge or that it was less than expected?)
Pryden: 'Sup? [cut to Pryden, smile drops, and confused repeats: "Huh?"]
Veezal: I dunno. No disrespect, but I thought the job training for something so important would be... longer [for a primary duty]?longer? Not just a one-day thingcrash [course? (vs. "thing")]?
Lornix: No need for that! You did great, and I have full confidence that you're more than prepared for your duties. [Adding on to that: "We specifically hire those who are strong and quick learners. I'm sure you'll be able to adapt quickly.]
Pryden: OurAlso departmentthere's ranno outroom ofin moneythe budget for the training budget lmao [(for a contrast with Lornix's last statement maybe replace current Pryden line with: "...quickly. "..." (after a pause) "Training is expensive." (for it to be quicker drop the first "...quickly" of Pryden parroting Lornix]
Lornix: Er! That is also true! [laughs nervously: "We wouldn't want to waste such skill with mundane training sessions when there are profitable industries you and your team are going to keep running smoothly!]
Veezal: Well. It'I'm sure it'll be fine.
Lornix: That's betterthe thanspirit! nothing.
Veezal: Thanks for your help! [trying to be optimistic and look good in front of his new management: Of course! I'm sure everything will click on the job. Thanks for clarifying that!]
Lornix: You're welcome! [+Anytime!]
Pryden: [cutsYay to Pryden smiling, maybe clapping?:] Yay{!]
(after a day of work)
Supervisor N: Alright! That's the end of the day!
V: I'm new to Mt Girava. What are some things to do?
Supervisor N: A bunch of us are going out for drinks, you're more than welcome to come along! But if you're looking for something more active, there's lots of other stuff.
There's our SOCIAL JUSTICE program where some of us volunteer!
We've got a in-house gymnasium that a lot of employees enjoy!
And if you like more indoorsy stuff, we have a book club!
V: HMMM. Let me think about it!
<dialogue branches>
[EVENING]
N: well that was nice! What to do now?
V: HMMM. Well, I do need to keep an eye on the house. I should also keep up to date with <my hobbies>. But sleep is important!
<choice>
(ZELRIK RUNTHROUGH)
N: okay Zelrik! Rise and shine!
It's time for your first day at work. Isn't that fascinating?
Z: ugh
N: Cordann! A land of dreams! Far away from home and all of its messiness. Up and at 'em!
Z: bleh
N: So convenient that we didn't need to do an apartment search. Very nice of Ultraviolet Industries Inc to provide us with free lodgings!
Z: I assume this is factored into my wages. 'Free' is a bit of a stretch.
N: Hooray!!
(heading to work)
(going to lobby)
(maybe see other workers first?)
(showing badge and ID)
[is this Z's first job?] what are narrative differences?
Emp: welcome to work! Here's ur stuff
Z: wait, that's it?
[How much training did Z have?] what are narrative differences?
here are your coworkers
hi
yay, go work!
oh shit
WAAAAAAAAAGH
[How prepared did the characters feel?] what are narrative differences?